IS A DEMAND LETTER SO DEMANDING?
by
Robin Axtell, BSN, RN, LNCC

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As Legal Nurse Consultants (LNCs), you have heard the legal term DEMAND LETTER, but do you fully understand its purpose and what it contains? Did you know that as nurses, LNCs already possess the skills to participate in drafting these letters?

So, what is a Demand Letter? It is a formal document, often several pages in length, which is used during the presuit phase of a case. It strategically outlines the details of an incident, sets forth expectations for resolution, summarizes treatment and associated costs, specifies payments being requested, and serves as a final effort to resolve a dispute between two parties before litigation. Because most of the demand letter is medically based, the LNC’s skills in record analysis, medical chronologies, billing review, identification of standards of care, and interpretation of treatment can play a key role in building a strong, well supported demand. This can save attorneys and legal staff valuable time. For the purpose of this article, the focus will be demand letters commonly used in personal injury cases; however, demand letters are also utilized in Business & Commercial Law, Intellectual Property, Real Estate & Landlord-Tenant, and Employment Law.

Personal injury claims arise when one party [plaintiff] is injured due to the actions or negligence of another party [defendant]. The plaintiff attorney represents the injured party, and the demand letter is directed to the defendant’s insurance company such as an auto carrier or commercial liability insurer. While formats may vary between law firms, the key components are typically the same. Understanding these components helps LNCs recognize where their expertise supports case development. So, let us break it down.

LIABILITY

The liability explains how the incident occurred and why the defendant is responsible. It typically includes a factual timeline of the events and supporting evidence, and references applicable citations or even laws and standards depending on what type of claim is being pursued. For example if this was an auto accident we might see something drafted such as:

On February 2, 2026, Ms. Jane Doe was the restrained driver of a 2015 Kia K5 traveling on I-95 and stopped with traffic. The roads were dry and conditions clear. Your insured driver, Mr. John Smith, was traveling behind my client and failed to note traffic patterns and caused the rear-end collision. Witnesses at the scene reported Ms. Doe had been stopped for several seconds prior to the crash. Due to noticeable laceration above the right eye and reported neck pain, Rescue #14 [County] responded to the scene and determined Ms. Doe needed further medical care and transported her with a cervical collar in place to Sideways Hospital for further evaluation and treatment. Enclosed please find the crash report citing your insured with Careless Driving (citation #…).”

The liability section can be as detailed as possible and if you are computer savvy, importing the drawing of the accident from the crash report or scene of the incident into the letter is a great tactic. If the photographs are decent, (i.e., property damage that is visible or a wet floor where someone fell) those could be included as well as attachments.

If you have the opportunity to review the accident report or incident report, take note of the details, especially mechanism of injury. What happened on impact? Was the injured party thrown forward and backward in a whipping motion? Did they strike their head or body anywhere in the vehicle or against the floor if a fall case? Victims can suffer axonal shearing of the brain by acceleration/deceleration maneuvers and/or from striking the back of their head against the headrest. Keep in mind, symptoms and injuries are ongoing and not always known immediately. Consider the concept of shaking a snow globe and the time it takes for all the particles to settle back down. The same happens when someone is injured.

INJURIES AND TREATMENT

The core of a persuasive demand letter lies in the clinical documentation. This is where the LNC shines. Rather than simply an attorney stating, “please find enclosed the medical records and bills” and leaving it to the insurance adjusters to determine what is relevant-which often occurs- this is where the LNC’s skills, knowledge, and clinical education truly shine. Who better to identify, organize, and highlight the most medically relevant information than an LNC. Not only will this save the law firm staff time, but the LNC’s comprehensive summary will most certainly place a higher value on the claim. I can assure you, if you are already providing medical summaries to a law firm, they are cutting and pasting it right into their demand letters – or they should be.

While the LNC’s focus will be on the medical portion, most insurance companies utilize some type of software system that calculates settlement offers based on the information provided in the letter. The LNC does not just summarize, but also identifies “value drivers” and translates dense clinical jargon into a persuasive narrative. To ensure the software’s algorithm recognizes the true severity of the claim, the LNC will ensure the Demand fully discloses:

  • The severity of the injuries and treatment, including ICD 10 and CPT Codes;
  • The client’s Maximum Medical Improvement (MMI) status;
  • If the client sustained a permanent injury;
  • Was there a documented impairment rating; and
  • Is there a foreseeable need for future care.

The adjusters who review the medical information may have no medical training and by connecting the mechanism of injury directly to the diagnostic findings and clinical findings and treatment, the LNC helps eliminate any gray area that insurance adjusters use to deny or devalue the claim.

MEDICAL EXPENSES AND BILLING SUMMARY

Medical expenses may or may not be listed directly in a Demand Letter. If the medical expenses are substantial it is common to see them in the letter. Otherwise, a separate attachment is included that outlines the medical expenses. Regardless of the format, the LNC provides essential clarity by synthesizing these costs into a comprehensive billing ledger (Often in MS Excel or Word). This summary tracks every provider, total charges, insurance adjustments, and outstanding balances. By auditing medical bills against health insurance liens and payout ledger, the LNC identifies missing documentation and filters out unrelated charges. Obtaining an expert review of ICD and CPT codes can ensure that only claim-relevant expenses are included, and provide a robust foundation for settlement negotiations or disputes.

LOST WAGES AND ECONOMIC DAMAGES

Significant injuries often result in immediate income loss and long-term economic impact. This section details those financial losses, typically supported by employer verification letters or tax returns demonstrating diminished profits. The LNC may review the records for verification that a physician has indeed placed the client out of work or indicated certain restrictions, such as light duty, if they were to return to work. If the injuries prevent the client from returning to work or returning to the same type of work, there could be a claim for loss of future earning capacity. Additional economic damages include property loss (vehicle repair or replacement), necessary medical equipment, home modifications, and travel expenses related to medical treatment.

PAIN AND SUFFERING/NON-ECONOMIC DAMAGES

While often omitted in standard demand letters, a detailed analysis of non-economic damages can significantly elevate a claim’s value. LNCs specialize in humanizing the medical data by documenting the profound impact an injury has on a client’s daily life. We look beyond the charts to identify “Duties Under Duress.” These are activities the client must continue to perform, despite physical limitations or pain caused by their injuries. The LNC’s investigation will include:

  • Has there been any lifestyle disruption from the pain and function loss and disruption of normal routine?
  • Are there any long term limitations?
  • Has there been a psychological impact (i.e., emotional distress, depression, PTSD, loss of injoyment of life)?
  • Do they have a permanent disfigurement (scarring, loss of limb, etc.)?
  • Are there family members, friends, or witnesses who provide a statement or affidavit detailing the changes noticed in the client’s personality or lifestyle?

EVALUATION OF THE CLAIM OR DEMAND TO SETTLEMENT

Following the above information, the Evaluation of the Claim is the critical juncture where the attorney established the settlement valuation and sets the definitive deadline for the insurer to respond and avoid litigation. While the attorney determines the final demand amount, the LNC provides the essential framework, ensuring the medical evidence is robust, organized, and strategically defensible. Should the parties fail to reach an agreement, this evaluation serves as the foundation for the decision to move the claim into active litigation.  

CONCLUSION

Mastering the art of the Demand letter elevates the LNC’s role from a consultant to a strategic partner. By turning complex medical evidence into a strategic legal document, the LNC does not just offer expertise, but streamlines operations and maximizes case productivity. Once again, our value as Legal Nurse Consultants becomes truly indispensable.

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Author: Robin Axtell, BSN, RN, LNCC
Email: rmaxtell@aol.com  
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    REGINA JOHNSON, MHA, BSN, RN

    Regina Johnson, MHA, BSN, RN, is a legal nurse consultant and the founder of A.C.E. Legal Nurse Consulting, LLC, which she launched in 2025. She has been a nurse for nine years, with clinical experience in the emergency department, intensive care unit, and as a nursing supervisor in primary care. Her background in fast-paced, high-acuity environments gives her a practical understanding of how medical decisions are made, documented, and communicated across healthcare teams.

    Today, Regina brings that clinical perspective to the legal field, assisting medical malpractice and personal injury attorneys with medical record analysis, timelines, and case evaluation. She enjoys helping legal professionals make sense of complex healthcare documentation and identifying the medical facts that matter most in a case. When she’s not reviewing records, Regina enjoys being involved with the Greater Orlando Chapter and connecting with other nurses and legal professionals.

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    Resources for “Is a Demand Letter so Demanding?”

    1.  Attorney resources. AALNC. (2025, October 27.) https://aalnc.org/attorney-resources/

    2.  Robinson, M. (2026, January 22). Strategies and tips for writing a personal injury demand letter. Clio.  https://www.clio.com/blog/personal-injury-demand-letter/

    3.  How ICD and CPT codes strengthen settlement demand letters for personal injury cases – trivent legal. (n.d.). https://triventlegal.com/blogs/how-icd-and-cpt-codes-strengthen-settlement-demand-letters-for-personal-injury-cases/

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